Divided Minds

[Nissa Harlow]

Oh, Dave. Too bad! A good man is hard to find.

[Kailani B.]

Taken too soon.

Thanks for reading!

[Emily S Hurricane]

Aaaaa this is too cool for a short story hahaha I’d read a whole novel about this premise 😍😍

[Kailani B.]

Thank you very much!

[Bryan Pirolli]

Great piece! Could have been sponsored by Blackwing with that pencil :) Thanks so much for contributing this to The Midnight Vault II.

[Kailani B.]

Thanks! The nod to Blackwing wasn’t intentional and I didn’t even notice it until after I’d written it, so I guess my subconscious decided to be a backseat writer for this story :)

[The Faraday Room]

A guy so nice he tolerates telemarketers? What a loss.

[Kailani B.]

There aren’t too many like him.

[Jay Myser]

This was such a magical story. And I just loved the dialogue.

[Kailani B.]

Thanks, Jay! That’s so nice to hear.

[Stephen]

emerald pencil! and I can't quite explain it but after reading it optimism lingers. there's something sad and wise about your writing. hats off

[Kailani B.]

Thanks for the great comment, Stephen!

I have more short stories you might enjoy, some of which I’ve narrated myself.

[Stephen]

sounds good! thank you

[Liam Palmer]

I enjoyed this thoroughly

[Kailani B.]

Woo-hoo! Thanks so much!

[Ian Barr]

This was great! Creepy, whimsical, and that ending! Oof. Haunting.

[Kailani B.]

Excuse me while I go tape this comment to my wall.

Thanks so much, Ian!

[Carolyn Mario]

Well, beware the crackin'.

[Kailani B.]

And let’s not forget guys in suits and glasses.

[William E.]

Well done! A modern take on a classic show.

It's interesting that both of our stores center around media (mine got finished but missed the deadline) but go in different directions.

[Kailani B.]

Thanks for reading!

I hope you post your story anyway.

[William E.]

I will, eventually.