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Whoa! Freaky but fun. Especially to listen to. Good job with the voices. I await Part 2. Meanwhile. . .

note to self: Stay out of the Scarlet.

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Glad you enjoyed it! The narration was a bit of a challenge, but I like how it turned out.

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Love it!

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Thanks! I had fun writing it.

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Great start, can't wait to read more! I especially love the way they talked and the way he thought.

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Thanks for reading! I’ll be starting part two soon.

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Nov 3Liked by Kailani B.

This is stellar, can't wait for the continuation. The noir vibes, the whole blood-type style thing, this is amazing. Can't wait for the next episode!

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Thanks so much! I never realized how much fun writing a vampire story could be, so thanks again for prompting me to do it!

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